Added: Nov 19, 2008

From: marissa910

Duration: 0:29

Ok so, here r teh characterss!-Elise as SavannahZoe as Kaitlyn ( Known as Kate )Lauren as AmandaSpecial Guests-Jeydon ( yes him ) as DerrickDadGabrielleOk now here's the story, haha-------------------------------------------------Lisa's POVI calmly sat down, and looked into his amazing brown eyes. I streched a hand out and said...Lisa- Hi. My name is Lisa???-* he looked at me, then motioned to a teen in front of him...must be a daughter... *???(daughter...girl...thing lol)- *turned around* qu'est-ce maintenant papa ?[[what is it now, dad?]]Dad-pouvez-vous traduire pour moi ?[[can you translate for me]]Daughter-Oui. * she turned to me and she in fluent english * Hi. I'm Gabrielle. See, we come from France so, that's the only language my dad speaks. He asked me to translate for him and you.Lisa- Nice to meet you! I can understand part french cause I am french to and studied french but..most of it has flown away. * i laughed *Dad- * he looked confused *Lisa- *turned to face **Mysterious** man* Salut. Je m'applle Lise.[[I think that's Lisa in French...she said Hey. My name is Lisa.]]Dan- *he smirked* Salut. Je m'applle Dan[[FRENCH! i've been taking french for a few weeks now, every other day so i thought someONE should be french in here.I'll translate....he said hey. My name is Dan.]]Lisa- * i smiled and turned back to his daughter * You don't need to translate now.We had a whole conversation in French as i tried to teach him EnglishAn hour past'vannah's POV [[ If i don't say POV, than Savannah's talkinn ]]I walk off with Derrick behind me as we come into the town- Wckyoff, New Jersey. The surroundings are beautifulDerrick- So...do you know where you live?Savannah- My mom said we were gonna live Katco Avenue [[LOL, rndmm name, really. you could look it up. idk if it exsists....lol]]Derrick- Same! Isn't that that new street that was made?Savannah- Yeah i heard.We were walking SO CLOSE that our hands touched...* angel sounds from heaven LOL *Derrick- *he started to hold my hand and we both noticed *The both of us- Oh sorry...*we looked away shyly*Derrick- Well um....a couple of my cousins and their girlfriends are having a party at their house on Saturday, and i wanted to know if you wanted to come....?Savannah- Sure!! I be there!Derrick's Mom- * stepping of the plane * Derrick! C'mon!Derrick- I gotta go....See yah Saturday.Savannah- * I smiled and waved bye as i waited for my mom to come off the plane. She was laughing with some MYSTERIOUS man and behind them was a girl who looked about my age *Gabrielle- * laughing with her boyfriend...i guess lol * HAHA! See ya later baby * gave him a quick peck on the cheek and ran to her dad and, she wasn't looking where she was going and ran into me....ouch.... *Gabrielle- I'm sooo sorry! * she helped me up *Savannah- That's alrighty * i brushed off and straightened my shirt as i politely reached out a hand * I'm Savannah. But people call me 'vannah or v- never mind. * i laughed *Gabrielle- I'm Gabrielle. But, people mistake my name for Gabriella so you can call me Gabby or Gabriella. Savannah- Awesome! * i looked at her and LOVED her hollister shirt * I lovee your shirtGabby- * looked down and forgot what she was wearing * Oh thanks! Haha i love your converses.I looked down and laughed. My oldd breakers. My friends always called them that...idk why...just an awesome name for 'em.Gabby- Hey look....you wanna hang out sometime?Savannah- Sure!Gabby- How about...the mall on Saturday around..12?Savannah- Sure!...again! hahaWe laughed as i looked for my mom and we saw my sister Carmella waving at me as i ran to her and gave her a big hug.I'll post moree l8terr!Poll...thing...lol:Which of my series do you like most?0 votes-The Story of a Girl1 votes-A JoBromance!1 votes-7 minutes in heaven1 votes- [[I HOPE IT STAYS AT 0 FOR NOW. haha x3 ]]Zanessa. A love story

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softballchix000 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - A JoBromance! i like that one the best!!!!!!! pls keep it

marissa910 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - haha!a LOT of ppl like that. i get like...a TON of messages saying DONT STOP A JOBROMANCE! hahathxx for likingg my seriess :Psince you like A JoBromance so much, im gonna post the next chapter ^^

softballchix000 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - your awsome, i guess ppl with the name marissa become awsome naturally lol<33 your stories

marissa910 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - exactly!im awesomeyour awesome.the world is awesome :P

softballchix000 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - exactlly FINALLY somone with some sence!!!!if the jonas brothers name were marissa, they would be 8800% more awsome, you know??whos yur fav jonas brother?

marissa910 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - exactly!some one who AGREES!my favorite is nick because nick j is off the chainn =]well he's my favorite because his bday is 6 days after mine and he is just so DAMN CUTE!and joe is the shitty one who dumped the best singer evrr over the phone.you sniff meh?

softballchix000 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - omg i love nick to, HES FRIGGIN GORGEOUS, SO IS JOE BUT HE CAN BURN IN A BLACK HOLE FOR ALL I CARE!! i actually would care cause then there would only b 1 hott guy on stage you feelin me?

benken234 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - 7 minutes in heaven can you please put that backup i will write all the episodes just have it on your channel and you can have all the credit please message me back when you read this

OLIVIA12345678912345 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - THIS ONE!!!!!!!!

marissa910 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - aww!!that's sooo sweet!!!!just for that im gonna bring back that series!!!

marissa910 Says:

Nov 19, 2008 - heckk yeah!